I wrote this poem, influenced by the life of an accquaintance of mine suffering from Diabetes.
A Diabetics Despair
People gobbling those pastries
And Feasting on jalebis
Ahhh!!! Envy and Despair merge
When you suppress that urge
You reach home all drained out
Only to find your spouse
Baking cakes, Sweet Smell of which
Is enough for you to arouse
But then the excitement dampens
When something disheartening happens
“You forgot to take your dose !!”
She yells and you end up morose
A disdainful life, you wonder
Feels like you lost your thunder
Your thoughts full of Custard
But end up eating Mustard
You engage yourself for a while
Losing that youthful smile
A sinking feeling whispers
You still have to cover a thousand miles.
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This is an attempt to put in words my own experiences in the Local Trains of Mumbai. Ironically, Our trains carry more that five times their capacity and still they say India is not efficient. Just kiddin………
The Virar Local
Your eyes depicting impatience
Reading the tabloid with reluctance
But thoughts are immersed elsewhere
The Meetings started, and you are nowhere
You curse, you damn, you fret
And Dream of a private jet
But then you hear the sound
Of the local on which you are bound
A thousand feet step forward
Making space to leap inward
You wrestle your way through them
Ahh!!! Their grudges you may stem
You’re glad that you won a seat
Of the numerous contenders you could beat
Elderly and the weak paid penalty
The seat by the window assumed royalty
For a moment you felt delight
To have a seat until you alight
But the journey turned rather gross,
Somebody stood with his rear to your nose
You get accustomed to the stink
On thy neighbors shoulder, you sink
And enjoy the deepest slumber
Which infects your fellow members
The journey ends with a long break
A kind soul helps you to awake
Alighting, you hasten your pace in dismay
Only to be back in the grind another day
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The Downpour. - An Ode to 26th July 2005 - The day Mumbai's heartbeat stopped
Look here “Ma”, the tyres are under water
Shouted Pratik at the top of his voice
As we stood watching, Heavens turned rioter,
Didn’t spare anything, be it Maruti or Rolls Royce
The privileged stood dry in their lair
While the rest were drenched and bewildered
Wading in deep puddles of despair
Their shanties – not less than murdered
Frantic calls of desperate womenfolk
Their offspring stranded in temples of learning,
Nobody cared for the hapless livestock
A watery grave – their lives were a turning
Back in the house, as we played Scrabble
There were some brave outside fighting for life
Public Transport was a mess – he wouldn’t dabble
Struggling Pedestrians were a sight that was rife
The morning after saw a mixed bag of emotions
Students rejoiced with a BANDH announcement
Assessing their losses, Fathers got loose motions
A Bollywood script – churning joy with resentment
Walk down the street was an unforgettable sight
Death and Destruction after the merciless barrage
Forces of Nature reacted with all their might
Lively streets metamorphosed in a GARAGE
It left me wondering “ I was lucky to be alive”
Almighty above, for me, had a soft corner
Survival was something, I didn’t have to strive
My due respects to the inconsolable mourner
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If Life was a software
Working on my computer,
Sometimes it made me think,
If life was a software,
It would never stink
Imagine if u had a choice
To SELECT ALL happiest moments
COPY and PASTE it in the present
To put an end to your laments
Precious times with loved ones
If only you could INSERT
In BLANK DOCUMENTS of Life,
which seemed Inert
FORMAT those bland moments
With FONTS of beauty
And FILL it with Color
With a THEME full of gaiety
If HELP was at hand
At all those difficult instances
And TOOLS were always available
To bridge those distances
Imagine if you could UNDO
a terrible mistake
And REDO those shots,
Which were good at first-take
If Life was OLD VERSION
You could easily UPGRADE
If prompted for payment
A CRACK had it swayed
But sometimes I wonder
If untouched, life is better
Cos, a BLUE SCREEN could end it
And apologize for the ERROR
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Thursday, November 19, 2009
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5 comments:
Hi Sonesh,
I loved the one on the Virar local and the about the floods, very heartfelt, soulful....
can't believe I'm reading poetry by you :)
looking forward to many many more!!!!
love + light!
Immensely Enjoyable! You have a knack for such kind of poems that are simple, descriptive and fun!!
Your poems are really good. The one on diabetes conveys a rather serious message with a dash of light humour; quite satirical.
Your poems are really good. The one on diabetes conveys a rather serious message with a dash of light humour; quite satirical.
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